We have been learning to use personification in our writing.
It was a cold icy morning. We were off to the AMAZING EVENT OF MOVIE WORLD. When we arrived, we had to pass the amazing doors. The doors were welcoming everyone to Movie World.
The first ride I went on was the SuperMan Escape. I was just over it but I was bending down because it looked scary. We lined up in the line for about five or ten minutes. When we were at the top of the line, we hopped on the roller coaster, and we started to go for a little ride. Then there it was - the outside of the roller coaster but we stopped and SUPERMAN was there and started to count. Ten… nine ……. eight …… seven ….. six…...five…….four…...three…...two…one.
We were off. We went up and down round and round and very fast. The ride finished. It was a cold icy morning. We were off to the AMAZING EVENT OF MOVIE WORLD. When we arrived, we had to pass the amazing doors. The doors were welcoming everyone to Movie World.
The first ride I went on was the SuperMan Escape. I was just over it but I was bending down because it looked scary. We lined up in the line for about five or ten minutes. When we were at the top of the line, we hopped on the roller coaster, and we started to go for a little ride. Then there it was - the outside of the roller coaster but we stopped and SUPERMAN was there and started to count. Ten… nine ……. eight …… seven ….. six…...five…….four…...three…...two…one.
We went to the bat wing space shot off. We stood in the line for one hour and a half. It was boring. Finally, we were at the top of the line. We hopped in the seats. Batman said, “Get ready to blast off.” I went flying in the air. We saw the whole building of Movie World.
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